My beast is called Fetid hound. it has a blue body of a large bird. It has three bat wings it has a long furry yellow tail. it has a wolf mouth with sharp shiny teeth it likes pennies a lot. It also has sharp claws too on its feet. it can breath fire from its frightening mouth, its sharp claws and sharp teeth can bite you they are sharp as a knights sword.
Aloha Herbert,
ReplyDeleteYour beast does sure sound like a scary one! I am thinking that your unique beast is like a bat winged bird with a furry tail and razor sharp teeth to eat pennies. Do you have a name for your beast? Some feedback I can give to you, is to add more detail and elaborate on the separate ideas that you've put in. What do the sharp claws do on the feet? Why does it have a furry tail? Anyways, have an amazing holiday!
Happy blogging
Gargee HPS
hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz
Hello bloggers,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Vitaraag. I really like your blog post because you tried telling us that it was a mix of birds and bat wings. Maybe next time you could add more detail about your beast. If you want to comment on my blog here is the link. https://hpsvitaraagj.blogspot.com/
Vitaraag
Kia ora Herbie,
ReplyDeleteAnother great SLJ post from you, Herbie. I absolutely love the name of your beast, "Fetid Hound". Without reading any further into your post it already sounds revolting. You have put a lot of thought into describing your beast. Such as, the simile you used to describe the sharpness of his teeth. I also really like how you have given it three wings. Where did you think Fetid Hound's third wing would go on his body?
Maybe you could draw a picture so I can see the kind of beast you have envisioned.
I hope you are enjoying the SLJ so far. Keep up the incredible work.